more tweaks

diff --git a/doc/altusmetrum.xsl b/doc/altusmetrum.xsl
index b42a8ca7a295f8480df9dc18e487ab64def28abb..b8aee23842d4eed789b93ca6afdd251570332e70 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/altusmetrum.xsl
+++ b/doc/altusmetrum.xsl
@@ -108,7 +108,8 @@ NAR #88757, TRA #12200
     <para>
       The newest device is TeleMini, a dual deploy altimeter with
       radio telemetry and radio direction finding. This device is only
     <para>
       The newest device is TeleMini, a dual deploy altimeter with
       radio telemetry and radio direction finding. This device is only

-      13mm by 38mm (½ inch by 1½ inches) and can fit easily in an 18mm air-frame.
+      13mm by 38mm (½ inch by 1½ inches) and can fit easily in an 18mm 
+      air-frame.

     </para>
     <para>
       Complementing TeleMetrum and TeleMini is TeleDongle, a USB to RF 
     </para>
     <para>
       Complementing TeleMetrum and TeleMini is TeleDongle, a USB to RF 


@@ -379,10 +380,9 @@ NAR #88757, TRA #12200
       </para>
     </section>
     <section>
       </para>
     </section>
     <section>

-      <title>Packet Command Mode</title>
-      <subtitle>Controlling An Altimeter Over The Radio Link</subtitle>
+      <title>Controlling An Altimeter Over The Radio Link</title>

       <para>
       <para>

-        One of the unique features of the Altus Metrum environment is
+        One of the unique features of the Altus Metrum system is

         the ability to create a two way command link between TeleDongle
         and an altimeter using the digital radio transceivers built into
         each device. This allows you to interact with the altimeter from
         the ability to create a two way command link between TeleDongle
         and an altimeter using the digital radio transceivers built into
         each device. This allows you to interact with the altimeter from


@@ -391,11 +391,12 @@ NAR #88757, TRA #12200
       <para>
         Any operation which can be performed with TeleMetrum can
         either be done with TeleMetrum directly connected to the
       <para>
         Any operation which can be performed with TeleMetrum can
         either be done with TeleMetrum directly connected to the

-        computer via the USB cable, or through the packet
+        computer via the USB cable, or through the radio

         link. TeleMini doesn't provide a USB connector and so it is
         link. TeleMini doesn't provide a USB connector and so it is

-        always controlled through the packet link.  Select the
+        always controlled through the radio link.  Select the

         appropriate TeleDongle device when the list of devices is
         appropriate TeleDongle device when the list of devices is

-        presented and AltosUI will use packet command mode.
+        presented and AltosUI will interact with an altimter over the
+        radio link.

       </para>
       <para>
        One oddity in the current interface is how AltosUI selects the
       </para>
       <para>
        One oddity in the current interface is how AltosUI selects the