and all of the electronics from 2YikStik. Everything else is new for this
build.
-Meanwhile, Robert became interested in measuring the temperature of a nose
+Robert is very interested in measuring the temperature of a nose
cone and a fin on a rocket at speeds above Mach. This led Bdale to design
a [TeleMetrum](http://altusmetrum.org/TeleMetrum) companion board called
[TeleScience](http://altusmetrum.org/TeleScience) capable of hosting up to
-12 NTC thermistors for temperature data collection.
-As was the case with 2YikStik](../2YikStik), the plan is to fly two
+12 NTC thermistors for temperature data collection. As was the case with
+[2YikStik](../2YikStik), the plan is to fly two
[TeleMetrum](http://altusmetrum.org/TeleMetrum)+[TeleScience](http://altusmetrum.org/TeleScience)
setups, one mounted in the nose cone and one mounted in the fin can. The
one in the fin can will be responsible for apogee deployment, and the one in
G-10 glass tubing this time around. Dynawind is lighter and strong enough,
but we want to use glass couplers this time around for more strength, and
that leads to fit issues with the Magnaframe-based Dynawind tubing. So even
-though it's slightly heavier, we're going with an all-gladd build this time.
+though it's slightly heavier, we're going with an all-glass build this time.
We'll lose a little bit of max velocity, but hopefully it'll all hang together
this time!