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@@ -4,19 +4,18 @@ Robert's first full-custom rocket, with electronic-deployment.
 
 ## Motivation
 
-Robert has wanted to try out electronic deployment for a while.  He received
-a [PerfectFlite](http://www.perfectflite.com/) 
+Robert had wanted to try out electronic deployment for a while.  After he
+received a [PerfectFlite](http://www.perfectflite.com/) 
 [MAWD](http://www.perfectflite.com/catalog/MAWD.html) commercial recording
-altimeter with dual deployment support as a gift, and this is the rocket 
-designed to make use of it.
-
+altimeter with dual deployment support as a Christmas gift, he designed 
+this rocket to make use of it.  
 
 ## Design Details
 
 * 54mm phenolic air frame
 * 29mm phenolic motor mount
 * [Giant Leap](http://giantleaprocketry.com/) Pinnacle 54mm nose cone
-* 1/8 inch birch plywood fin in a custom shape, with rounded edges
+* 1/8 inch birch plywood fins in a custom shape, with rounded edges
 * 1/4 inch birch plywood centering rings and bulkheads, CNC milled, the two 
 that hold the fins are notched for perfect fin alignment.