tweaking

diff --git a/bdale/blog/posts/Packaged_AltOS.mdwn b/bdale/blog/posts/Packaged_AltOS.mdwn
index 8f070cd48edb13400be3e02e3d224bb2b7e03e67..b324779e0076b93062404711d176cdcb771747d9 100644 (file)
--- a/bdale/blog/posts/Packaged_AltOS.mdwn
+++ b/bdale/blog/posts/Packaged_AltOS.mdwn
@@ -6,11 +6,11 @@ boards.  Five new ones, in fact, serial numbers 7 through 11.  The first
 four are fully-loaded normal boards, the last one has a 100 gee accelerometer
 installed instead of the normal 50 gee part.
 
-While I haven't yet tested 100% of the functionality on all the boards, I'm
+While I haven't yet tested 100% of the functionality on all five, I'm
 definitely getting better at loading and reflow soldering these boards.  I
-found exactly one soldering defect in the set of 5 boards, a bridge between
-two pins on the cc1111 noticed during initial visual inspection which was 
-easily removed, and all 5 flashed and passed initial tests on the first try!
+found exactly one soldering defect, a bridge between two pins on the cc1111 
+noticed during initial visual inspection which was easily removed, and all 
+five flashed and passed initial tests on the first try!
 
 I also retrieved one of the [OLPC](http://laptop.org) XO machines from my son
 and loaded it up with [Debian for the XO](http://wiki.laptop.org/go/DebXO),