grammar improvement

diff --git a/bdale/blog/posts/Mixed_Emotions_On_Debian_Anniversary.mdwn b/bdale/blog/posts/Mixed_Emotions_On_Debian_Anniversary.mdwn
index ea29eebe16464fbd6644aaa4e02f5a9fd2efdcf3..03657627c8febb3d67ec16d595191a435adb0e52 100644 (file)
--- a/bdale/blog/posts/Mixed_Emotions_On_Debian_Anniversary.mdwn
+++ b/bdale/blog/posts/Mixed_Emotions_On_Debian_Anniversary.mdwn
@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ same, because in her half-century-plus professional career, "Ms Franklin"
 won something like 18 Grammy awards, the Presidential Medal of Freedom, 
 and other honors too numerous to list.  She will be missed.
 
-What's the connection, if any, between these two?  In 2002, in the 
-[platform I wrote as a candidate for election as Debian Project Leader](https://www.debian.org/vote/2002/platforms/bdale), 
+What's the connection, if any, between these two?  In 2002, in my
+[platform for election as Debian Project Leader](https://www.debian.org/vote/2002/platforms/bdale), 
 I wrote that "working on Debian is my way of expressing my most strongly 
 held beliefs about freedom, choice, quality, and utility."  Over the years,
 I've come to think of