grammar improvement

diff --git a/bdale/blog/posts/Mixed_Emotions_On_Debian_Anniversary.mdwn b/bdale/blog/posts/Mixed_Emotions_On_Debian_Anniversary.mdwn
index ea29eebe16464fbd6644aaa4e02f5a9fd2efdcf3..03657627c8febb3d67ec16d595191a435adb0e52 100644 (file)
--- a/bdale/blog/posts/Mixed_Emotions_On_Debian_Anniversary.mdwn
+++ b/bdale/blog/posts/Mixed_Emotions_On_Debian_Anniversary.mdwn
@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ same, because in her half-century-plus professional career, "Ms Franklin"
 won something like 18 Grammy awards, the Presidential Medal of Freedom, 
 and other honors too numerous to list.  She will be missed.
 
 won something like 18 Grammy awards, the Presidential Medal of Freedom, 
 and other honors too numerous to list.  She will be missed.
 

-What's the connection, if any, between these two?  In 2002, in the 
-[platform I wrote as a candidate for election as Debian Project Leader](https://www.debian.org/vote/2002/platforms/bdale), 
+What's the connection, if any, between these two?  In 2002, in my
+[platform for election as Debian Project Leader](https://www.debian.org/vote/2002/platforms/bdale), 

 I wrote that "working on Debian is my way of expressing my most strongly 
 held beliefs about freedom, choice, quality, and utility."  Over the years,
 I've come to think of 
 I wrote that "working on Debian is my way of expressing my most strongly 
 held beliefs about freedom, choice, quality, and utility."  Over the years,
 I've come to think of