update text to have tenses make more sense, etc
authorBdale Garbee <bdale@gag.com>
Tue, 21 Jul 2015 17:51:55 +0000 (11:51 -0600)
committerBdale Garbee <bdale@gag.com>
Tue, 21 Jul 2015 17:51:55 +0000 (11:51 -0600)
commita82b086188a268178857b11c64913ca7f53c1ad3
tree2a77603473c471e2bf4b98bd452a8a109df6239a
parentcd15f9c453456cf18f5654c231f4d37602a1a267
update text to have tenses make more sense, etc
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