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 [Bdale](http://www.gag.com/~bdale) is 
 [NAR](http://nar.org/) Sr member 87103 and 
 [Tripoli](http://tripoli.org/) member 12201, and holds a level 3 
-high power certification.  Robert is [NAR](http://nar.org/) Jr member 
-87104, and [Tripoli](http://tripoli.org/) member 14036.  He was one 
-of the first kids to pass the
-[Tripoli Mentoring Program](http://www.tripoli.org/TMP) 
-exam, and at age 16 can now often be spotted flying research motors at
-Tripoli launches!
+high power certification.  Robert is [NAR](http://nar.org/) Sr member 
+87104 and [Tripoli](http://tripoli.org/) member 14036, and also holds a 
+level 3 high power certification.  Robdert was one of the first kids to 
+pass the [Tripoli Mentoring Program](http://www.tripoli.org/TMP) 
+exam, and flew a lot of high power including a fair number of research 
+motors in mentored projects before turning 18...
 
 ## [Airframes](airframes) ##
 
 ## Photos ##
 
-See some of our launch photos in Bdale's <a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/28636323@N03/">Flickr Photostream</a>.
+See some of our launch photos in the [Garbee Gallery](http://gallery.gag.com/rockets/), 
+and on 
+Bdale's <a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/28636323@N03/">Flickr Photostream</a>.
 
 ## Clubs ##
 
 We have family memberships in (and regularly enjoy flying our 
 models with!) local clubs 
-[COSROCS](http://cosrocs.org/), which is 
-[NAR](http://nar.org/) section #515, 
-[SCORE](http://scronline.net), which is 
-[NAR](http://nar.org/) section #632, and 
-[NCR](http://ncrocketry.org), which is 
-[NAR](http://nar.org/) section #565, and 
-[Tripoli](http://www.tripoli.org/) Prefecture #72.
+[Tripoli Colorado](http://www.tripolicolorado.org/),
+[SCORE](http://scronline.net), 
+and
+[NCR](http://ncrocketry.org).
+
 We have also flown with 
-[Tripoli Colorado](http://www.tripolicolorado.org/) and
-[ARS](http://www.arsabq.org/).
+[ARS](http://www.arsabq.org/),
+[COSROCS](http://cosrocs.org/), 
+[Kloudbusters](http://kloudbusters.org/),
+[Metra](http://metrarocketclub.org/),
+[NRVR](http://nrvr.org/),
+[NZRA](http://www.nzrocketry.org.nz/),
+and 
+[QRS](https://qldrocketry.com/).
 
 ## Vendors ##