From: Bdale Garbee <bdale@gag.com>
Date: Fri, 8 Feb 2013 15:29:10 +0000 (-0700)
Subject: fix a couple think-o's and tweak the text a bit while creating web store page
X-Git-Url: https://git.gag.com/?p=web%2Faltusmetrum;a=commitdiff_plain;h=56eab26ba7eb53e281499a98f1f1a7055020814a

fix a couple think-o's and tweak the text a bit while creating web store page
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diff --git a/MicroPeakUSB/index.mdwn b/MicroPeakUSB/index.mdwn
index e5c4c78..0165144 100644
--- a/MicroPeakUSB/index.mdwn
+++ b/MicroPeakUSB/index.mdwn
@@ -22,8 +22,8 @@ USB Interface.
 ## MicroPeak Interface ##
 
 [MicroPeak](../MicroPeak/) transmits the entire flight log via the LED just after
-reporting the last flight altitude at power up. The data are
-transmitted in regular serial format at 9600 baud.
+reporting the last flight altitude at power up. The data burst is
+transmitted in a simple serial format at 9600 baud.
 
 The MicroPeak USB Interface board contains a phototransistor,
 op-amp and serial-to-USB interface chip. It also includes a blue LED
@@ -32,9 +32,9 @@ aligning the two boards by hand quite easy.
 
 ## MicroPeak Application ##
 
-The MicroPeak application is written in Java application and runs on
-Windows, Mac OS X and Windows. Captures and saves data, provides
-plots and statistics. More information is available on the main
+The MicroPeak application written in Java runs on
+Windows, Mac OS X and Linux.  It captures and saves the flight data, then
+produces plots and statistics. More information is available on the main
 [MicroPeak](../MicroPeak/) page.
 
 <img src="micropeak-graph.png"/>