doc: Errors in the TeleMini v3.0 updates found by Bdale

Signed-off-by: Keith Packard <keithp@keithp.com>

diff --git a/doc/altusmetrum-docinfo.xml b/doc/altusmetrum-docinfo.xml
index 6214cfd8858f50fb9674f4470b258b73481d9f7c..65519bb24be7b7d989d05cf54514be9926337654 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/altusmetrum-docinfo.xml
+++ b/doc/altusmetrum-docinfo.xml
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
     <revnumber>1.7</revnumber>
     <date>21 Apr 2017</date>
     <revremark>
     <revnumber>1.7</revnumber>
     <date>21 Apr 2017</date>
     <revremark>

-      Add support for TeleMini in firmware, AltosUI and AltosDroid
+      Add support for TeleMini v3.0 in firmware, AltosUI and AltosDroid

     </revremark>
   </revision>
   <revision>
     </revremark>
   </revision>
   <revision>

diff --git a/doc/system-operation.inc b/doc/system-operation.inc
index 67b7e6933ec5f64f1b4eed36c7cd701c79b407f5..17dfdf89106f43d33edb1391b05fdf8951c9d4d1 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/system-operation.inc
+++ b/doc/system-operation.inc
@@ -26,8 +26,8 @@
                otherwise the board enters “flight” mode.
                ifdef::telemini[]
                TeleMini
                otherwise the board enters “flight” mode.
                ifdef::telemini[]
                TeleMini

-               selects “idle” mode if receives a command packet is
-               received within the
+               selects “idle” mode if it receives a command packet
+               within the

                first five seconds of operation.
                endif::telemini[]
 
                first five seconds of operation.
                endif::telemini[]
 


@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
                mode for requests sent via TeleDongle.  Commands can be issued
                in idle mode over either USB or the radio link
                equivalently.
                mode for requests sent via TeleDongle.  Commands can be issued
                in idle mode over either USB or the radio link
                equivalently.

-               ifdef::telemini[TeleMini only have the radio link.]
+               ifdef::telemini[TeleMini only has the radio link.]

                endif::radio[]
                Idle mode is useful for configuring the altimeter, for
                extracting data from the on-board storage chip after
                endif::radio[]
                Idle mode is useful for configuring the altimeter, for
                extracting data from the on-board storage chip after


@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
                endif::telemetrum,telemega,easymega[]
 
                ifdef::telemini[]
                endif::telemetrum,telemega,easymega[]
 
                ifdef::telemini[]

-               TeleMini are configured solely via the radio link. Of course, that
+               TeleMini is configured solely via the radio link. Of course, that

                means you need to know the TeleMini radio configuration values
                or you won't be able to communicate with it. For situations
                when you don't have the radio configuration values,
                means you need to know the TeleMini radio configuration values
                or you won't be able to communicate with it. For situations
                when you don't have the radio configuration values,


@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@
                Any operation which can be performed with a flight computer can
                either be done with the device directly connected to the
                computer via the USB cable, or through the radio
                Any operation which can be performed with a flight computer can
                either be done with the device directly connected to the
                computer via the USB cable, or through the radio

-               link. TeleMini don't provide a USB connector and so it is
+               link. TeleMini doesn't provide a USB connector and so it is

                always communicated with over radio.  Select the appropriate
                TeleDongle device when the list of devices is presented and
                AltosUI will interact with an altimeter over the radio link.
                always communicated with over radio.  Select the appropriate
                TeleDongle device when the list of devices is presented and
                AltosUI will interact with an altimeter over the radio link.