doc: A few minor edits to telelaunch docs

3 → three
less → fewer
transreflexive -> reflective

Signed-off-by: Keith Packard <keithp@keithp.com>

diff --git a/doc/telelaunch-configuration.inc b/doc/telelaunch-configuration.inc
index 0e553405ba6ad2f3373e2204f911567c3bd38962..f5199cc4820b53772e7c0ad4eac552742d150222 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/telelaunch-configuration.inc
+++ b/doc/telelaunch-configuration.inc
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 == Configuration
 
 == Configuration
 

-       There are 3 things you need to configure identically in each unit
+       There are three things you need to configure identically in each unit

        that is part of a TeleLaunch system for wireless communications to
        succeed.  Those are the operating frequency, the callsign, and a key
        for the AES encryption algorithm.  Additionally, each TeleFire unit
        that is part of a TeleLaunch system for wireless communications to
        succeed.  Those are the operating frequency, the callsign, and a key
        for the AES encryption algorithm.  Additionally, each TeleFire unit


@@ -115,7 +115,7 @@
 
                Each TeleFire unit needs to be configured with a bank number,
                and bank numbers should be unique within a given system.  For
 
                Each TeleFire unit needs to be configured with a bank number,
                and bank numbers should be unique within a given system.  For

-               most systems with 8 or less banks, just use the DIP switch
+               most systems with 8 or fewer banks, just use the DIP switch

                on the circuit board inside the TeleFire unit to select the
                desired bank.  Only one switch should be turned on.  Switch
                one means bank one, etc.
                on the circuit board inside the TeleFire unit to select the
                desired bank.  Only one switch should be turned on.  Switch
                one means bank one, etc.

diff --git a/doc/telelaunch-operation.inc b/doc/telelaunch-operation.inc
index 4ad50344e308050a80a38754d2f74669ed6851fb..996d16ebb0eca517d0d2831df673fc309c514a78 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/telelaunch-operation.inc
+++ b/doc/telelaunch-operation.inc
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
                The TeleLCO unit should be placed on a table at the Launch
                Control position.  It can be helpful for the LCO (the human(s)
                too, not just the electronics!) to be provided with some 
                The TeleLCO unit should be placed on a table at the Launch
                Control position.  It can be helpful for the LCO (the human(s)
                too, not just the electronics!) to be provided with some 

-               shade, but the use of transreflexive LCDs for the digit 
+               shade, but the use of reflective LCDs for the digit 

                displays and ultri-bright LEDs make TeleLCO operation 
                reasonable even in direct sunlight.
 
                displays and ultri-bright LEDs make TeleLCO operation 
                reasonable even in direct sunlight.