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@@ -373,8 +373,8 @@ NAR #88757, TRA #12200
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Uses LiPo to fire e-matches, support for optional separate pyro
-          battery if needed.
+          Uses LiPo to fire e-matches, can be modiied to support 
+  	  optional separate pyro battery if needed.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
@@ -449,11 +449,10 @@ NAR #88757, TRA #12200
       to fire ejection charges.  This works marvelously with standard
       low-current e-matches like the J-Tek from MJG Technologies, and with
       Quest Q2G2 igniters.  However, if you
-      want or need to use a separate pyro battery, you can do so by adding
-      a second 2mm connector to position B2 on the board and cutting the
-      thick pcb trace connecting the LiPo battery to the pyro circuit between
-      the two silk screen marks on the surface mount side of the board shown
-      here [insert photo]
+      want or need to use a separate pyro battery, the board can be factory
+      modified to do so.  This involves cutting two traces and adding a jumper
+      in a densely populated part of the board on TeleMetrum v1.0 and v1.1,
+      along with installation of a pyro battery connector at location B2.
     </para>
     <para>
       We offer two choices of pyro and power switch connector, or you can
@@ -973,7 +972,7 @@ NAR #88757, TRA #12200
       <title>Packet Command Mode</title>
       <subtitle>Controlling TeleMetrum Over The Radio Link</subtitle>
       <para>
-        One of the unique features of the Altos Metrum environment is
+        One of the unique features of the Altus Metrum environment is
         the ability to create a two way command link between TeleDongle
         and TeleMetrum using the digital radio transceivers built into
         each device. This allows you to interact with TeleMetrum from
@@ -1605,6 +1604,7 @@ NAR #88757, TRA #12200
         other authorization to legally operate the radio transmitters that are part
         of our products.
       </para>
+      </section>
       <section>
         <title>In the Rocket</title>
         <para>
@@ -1728,7 +1728,6 @@ NAR #88757, TRA #12200
           feel free to dive in and help!  Or let us know what you'd like to see that
           we aren't already working on, and maybe we'll get excited about it too...
         </para>
-      </section>
     </section>
   </chapter>
 </book>