Merge branch 'master' of ssh://git.gag.com/scm/git/fw/altos

[fw/altos] / doc / altusmetrum.xsl

diff --git a/doc/altusmetrum.xsl b/doc/altusmetrum.xsl
index d5418f24fe8fba281b122541ba5b1c53d9dfb50a..3a8f51d311569b3f6a7a7a61178b705a2f0c7e69 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/altusmetrum.xsl
+++ b/doc/altusmetrum.xsl
@@ -445,10 +445,10 @@ NAR #88757, TRA #12200
         close the window before performing other desired radio operations.
       </para>
       <para>
         close the window before performing other desired radio operations.
       </para>
       <para>

-        TeleMetrum only enables packet command mode in 'idle' mode, so
+        TeleMetrum only enables radio commanding in 'idle' mode, so

         make sure you have TeleMetrum lying horizontally when you turn
         it on. Otherwise, TeleMetrum will start in 'pad' mode ready for
         make sure you have TeleMetrum lying horizontally when you turn
         it on. Otherwise, TeleMetrum will start in 'pad' mode ready for

-        flight and will not be listening for command packets from TeleDongle.
+        flight, and will not be listening for command packets from TeleDongle.

       </para>
       <para>
        TeleMini listens for a command packet for five seconds after
       </para>
       <para>
        TeleMini listens for a command packet for five seconds after


@@ -462,12 +462,10 @@ NAR #88757, TRA #12200
        operation can be performed.
       </para>
       <para>
        operation can be performed.
       </para>
       <para>

-        When packet command mode is enabled, you can monitor the link
-        by watching the lights on the
-        devices. The red LED will flash each time they
-        transmit a packet while the green LED will light up
-        on TeleDongle while it is waiting to receive a packet from
-       the altimeter.
+        You can monitor the operation of the radio link by watching the 
+        lights on the devices. The red LED will flash each time a packet
+        is tramsitted, while the green LED will light up on TeleDongle when 
+        it is waiting to receive a packet from the altimeter.

       </para>
     </section>
     <section>
       </para>
     </section>
     <section>


@@ -540,13 +538,13 @@ NAR #88757, TRA #12200
       <section>
         <title>Radio Frequencies</title>
         <para>
       <section>
         <title>Radio Frequencies</title>
         <para>

-         The Altus Metrum boards support frequencies in the 70cm
+         Altus Metrum boards support radio frequencies in the 70cm

          band. By default, the configuration interface provides a
          band. By default, the configuration interface provides a

-         list of 10 common frequencies in 100kHz channels starting at
+         list of 10 "standard" frequencies in 100kHz channels starting at

          434.550MHz.  However, the firmware supports use of
          any 50kHz multiple within the 70cm band. At any given
          434.550MHz.  However, the firmware supports use of
          any 50kHz multiple within the 70cm band. At any given

-         launch, we highly recommend coordinating who will use each
-         frequency and when to avoid interference.  And of course, both
+         launch, we highly recommend coordinating when and by whom each
+         frequency will be used to avoid interference.  And of course, both

          altimeter and TeleDongle must be configured to the same
          frequency to successfully communicate with each other.
         </para>
          altimeter and TeleDongle must be configured to the same
          frequency to successfully communicate with each other.
         </para>