From: Bdale Garbee <bdale@gag.com>
Date: Tue, 13 Sep 2011 08:05:45 +0000 (-0600)
Subject: make front page text less folksy
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make front page text less folksy
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 ![Altus Metrum Logo](logo.png)
 
-This is the site where 
+Open hardware and software designs by
 [Bdale Garbee](http://gag.com/~bdale) and 
 [Keith Packard](http://keithp.com/keithp)
-document our work on open hardware and software designs for
-high powered model rocketry avionics solutions.
+for high powered model rocketry.
 <p>
 All hardware designs on this site are licensed under the 
 [TAPR](http://www.tapr.org/)