From: Bdale Garbee Date: Thu, 16 Aug 2018 17:29:26 +0000 (-0600) Subject: grammar improvement X-Git-Url: https://git.gag.com/?p=web%2Fgag.com;a=commitdiff_plain;h=0b04b1131c2d56acd226ba8bf3b8e35c5629173a grammar improvement --- diff --git a/bdale/blog/posts/Mixed_Emotions_On_Debian_Anniversary.mdwn b/bdale/blog/posts/Mixed_Emotions_On_Debian_Anniversary.mdwn index ea29eeb..0365762 100644 --- a/bdale/blog/posts/Mixed_Emotions_On_Debian_Anniversary.mdwn +++ b/bdale/blog/posts/Mixed_Emotions_On_Debian_Anniversary.mdwn @@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ same, because in her half-century-plus professional career, "Ms Franklin" won something like 18 Grammy awards, the Presidential Medal of Freedom, and other honors too numerous to list. She will be missed. -What's the connection, if any, between these two? In 2002, in the -[platform I wrote as a candidate for election as Debian Project Leader](https://www.debian.org/vote/2002/platforms/bdale), +What's the connection, if any, between these two? In 2002, in my +[platform for election as Debian Project Leader](https://www.debian.org/vote/2002/platforms/bdale), I wrote that "working on Debian is my way of expressing my most strongly held beliefs about freedom, choice, quality, and utility." Over the years, I've come to think of